Simple, but so beautiful! Very sad. I love the part where he's remembering her. Keep it up!
That was really amazing. I must say, your work is great!
That was so sweet!
that is really deep! i love the stories that lead you into a characters mind and stretch out the scene. keep writing more!!
Awwww that was really good for something that short! I kinda didn't expect that, wow, well done!