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Reviewer: Sarah Zitter Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/09/08 - 03:33 am Title: Chapter 2

PLEASE continue with this story. I would want to know when Erik gets to free Christine from the Prince so that Erik and Christine can get married to each other instead of the prince. PLEASE e-mail me back at sarah.zitter@yahoo.com
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Reviewer: Fantasma Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/08/07 - 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 2

Again, not bad, but some more description would give the story more debth. Keep it up!

Reviewer: Fantasma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/08/07 - 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

Not a bad begining! The way you wrote the poetic language is very beautiful, but there are some areas that are in need of poetic language like Erik's "death". It's not bad, though. The Princess Bride kinda reminded me of EC too. Keep writing!

Reviewer: Little Lotte Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/07/07 - 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 2

Still love it! Great work!

Reviewer: Little Lotte Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/07/07 - 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hehehe, this is based off of one of my favourite movies!!!! YAY for you!!!!!

Reviewer: Marielle Jones Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/06/07 - 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hey, your story's great so far. I like the Princess Bride too. I was only wondering how Christine all of a sudden knew that just becuz erik said "as u wish" she thought he loved her! idk...it just seems like fake love.

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