Reviewer: Fantasma Signed
10/05/07 - 11:21 pm
Do You Love Me?
Very strong! Although, I would advise you to stay away from modern words. Try not to refer sex as just sex, but as something a bit deeper to give it more of a Victorian essence. Other than that, I really liked it! You're a really good writer and keep up the good work! I hope to see a lot of stories of yours on SD after this one!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it. I'll try to keep your advise in mind!
Author's Response: Sorry, I spelled advice wrong!