05/04/07 - 09:02 pm
Help me say goodbye
This is, with as much respect as deemed polite, the most Mary Sue'esque' piece ever written. Can I ask you one question? Do you worship Anne Rice?
Just wondering, because it's horribly prevalent down to participle usage. Be kind and develop an original writing style, not a rip-off of published authors whom you admire.
Author's Response: Again, if you don't like it, don't read it. I am a fan of Anne Rice, but I have only read three of her books and in IwtV, she exadurated Claudia's beauty and I'm not doing that. But, whatever floats your boat (or sinks it.).